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How Heavenly by ~mile2smile:iconmile2smile:



How heavenly a feeling your hand upon my waist
Great strength in that reverses any bitterness or haste
I miss the way love speaks to me and grabs my heart so tight
I hate feeling this darkness but love heading towards your light
You say you can't remember or can't think a single phrase
So then you leave me lying here dieing here for days
You look at me with eyes so bright, so beautiful and big
And in those eyes I see those words so listen to me, dig
I see the man I want forever hiding there inside you
If you refuse to see it then please tell me what should I do
I crave you every second, every minute, everyday
I want your love, I want your touch, I want you most to say
Say you love me deeply and you think I am your all
And in this world so crazy, together we shall never fall
I know the truth behind us and I see a future bright
So when you gonna learn to live it up, give up the fight
You say no time to talk or touch you're tired or you're mad
But sometimes almost anything could make this woman glad
With every word so meaningful yet you don't know how much
There's always time to think them up and pair them with a touch

Jacqualynn M Jenke
©2006-2008 ~mile2smile
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When i felt the love in him was growng tired

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~Semihollow:iconSemihollow: May 13, 2006, 9:38:47 PM
I noticed your message and am reading your poetry... It is sad much like mine from the past. When I read this, the thought of so many people in the world only wanting what they can't have, or can no longer have, really makes my heart beat. :lonely:
~mile2smile:iconmile2smile: May 14, 2006, 12:33:18 AM
Thank you, very intuitive. I hope you will read others, i tried to end this with an up beat. i guess a "moral of the story" ending... :rose:

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~mikey-madness:iconmikey-madness: Jun 7, 2006, 6:01:05 AM
It is weird how you crave that feeling.Like you can almost feel them within your fingertips still. It is weird. You want so much to touch them just one more time. To hold them one more time. To share one last precious memory together. Because when it comes down to it, all we have is our precious memories. With all the money, gold, diamonds and all these material things, the things we hold most dear is our dreams and hopes.

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~mile2smile:iconmile2smile: Jun 7, 2006, 1:47:18 PM
yes. i am feeling alot of this right now. The wish they were laying next to you at night type of feeling. Sometimes you have so many memories you can feel it. almost like theyre really there. :(

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~mile2smile:iconmile2smile: Jun 7, 2006, 1:47:53 PM
yes. i am feeling alot of this right now. The wish they were laying next to you at night type of feeling. Sometimes you have so many memories you can feel it. almost like theyre really there. :(

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~mikey-madness:iconmikey-madness: Jun 7, 2006, 3:19:08 PM
That is the worst. i wish i could make it feel better. but I am going throgh the same thing. It is not necarriily that you miss them, just them being there. to have that constant company. you don't even have to hold that person, just knowing they are there. You will almost put up with the wrong person, just for the comfort that they will be there. Comes down to the question, which is worse, being alone or being miserable with the wrong person, but not alone. A dilema I have faced many times.

I have a million and one stories to tell. LOl I could go all day long. In short, i get yah

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~mikey-madness:iconmikey-madness: Jun 7, 2006, 3:26:36 PM
The heart will heal, it always does :) If you need someone to talk to, that won't pass judgement, and just listen to you. I am there. just let know. Ok?

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~mile2smile:iconmile2smile: Jun 12, 2006, 1:51:21 PM
i appreciate it. and same here, always.

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~mile2smile:iconmile2smile: Jun 12, 2006, 1:51:41 PM
i appreciate it. and same here, always.

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If your life is burning well, poetry is the ash ~leonard cohen