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Hot Tub by ~mile2smile:iconmile2smile:



Dont think we'll hook up
I'll end up
With a cup
Of jack and coke
Ready to choke
On the blood in my throat
With one cut i made
One night when it got late
Decided to end
Gave up on tryin' to mend
Things with my friend

Cant take this Life
I sharpen my knife
Just cant stand
Being Damned
To hold the future in my hand
Ready to explode
Stuck goin' Flip-Mode
Down the same road
Sinkin' in the same old boat

DON'T sugar coat-
This situation
Sexual Frustration
Between two good buds
Wont end in Love
But with a shove
To the chest
I know the rest
Emotional tests
Makin' me think twice
About rolling the dice
Gambling with Life

Feeling worth SHIT
They dont get
I've had it
The headaches
Trembling shakes
Give and Takes
Just to make
Things stay the same
As they were
Before you were sure
They were the one
There goes the fun
Fuck a knife get a gun
Cause it was done
Before we begun
©2007-2008 ~mile2smile
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First of all the Title is an ode to a scribble on a piece of paper. Ive held onto this for some time. Finally decided to type it up, touch it up and see what ya think.

The poem is Free Form Flow - i think obviously - about a feeling i got when i started to like a good friend of mine. A feeling like the loss could put me over the edge. A feeling like it will be a neverending battle to make things go back the way things were. If I did persue it. Pressure to do the right thing.

Jacqualyn Maria Jenke 5/7/07

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